I am ready to delete most of my paper. I wrote about Eve in Paradise Lost, and I did not like it. I’ll delete it because I’m unsure how it will work with Motherhood/Religious expectations in His Dark Materials. I am probably going to ask my reviewers how they feel about the section before I delete it because I did write a fair amount. However, if they don’t like it, I will cut it.
Otherwise, I feel like I finalized my thesis to a degree. It is definitely going to focus on the women in the story and how they are perceived. If I cut the Eve section, then I will add in a little sub-analysis for the witches and Gyptian women. I didn’t add them because I was worried about having enough space for them in the paper. However, if I do that, then Eve gets shortened to a small section of the paper rather than a whole three-page analysis.
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